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Night has changed me.
I will never be the same.
Too many tears.
Too many broken promises.
Too few warm words.
Too little of your presence here
To feel alive.
I thought you would always be here.
The word 'friendship' has lost its meaning
When I let go of you.
Goodbye and goodnight.
May someone be here for you
Like you should have been for me
Before it's too late...
I will never be the same.
Too many tears.
Too many broken promises.
Too few warm words.
Too little of your presence here
To feel alive.
I thought you would always be here.
The word 'friendship' has lost its meaning
When I let go of you.
Goodbye and goodnight.
May someone be here for you
Like you should have been for me
Before it's too late...
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This is a good concept. "Night has changed me." works well; we readers can readily associate night with change and transformations. And I like where you take the idea. I do find some of the word choices and tenses confusing, so if you'd like more critical feedback, I'd be happy to give it.