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Begining of a ghost story

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    The world was slowly fading away into the darkness. In this overwhelming silence she could only hear the beating of her own heart. And she felt as if the world was listening to each of her breaths and watching all of the steps she took.

    Suddenly the high scream cut through the air and cold chills went down her body. It was too dark to see anything. Silver streams ran down her face as terrible images of small girl flew through her mind. She closed her eyes tightly just to erase these pictures. A cold hand touched her shoulder and when she opened her eyes no one was there.

    'Do not fear me,' something whispered into her ear. 'Do no let this sadness overwhelm you.'

    The girl trembling listened to the faint words.

    'Please listen to the will of the holder of your deepest dreams.'

    The girl stood up and as if lead by some mysterious power slowly went into the dead darkness, unafraid, unfeeling.
This is just a begining to a ghost story. This was our school assignment. We had to do it in groups of 4 or 5 people. But well... Our group work was my work. We started something in class but I just could write it down right. So I wrote my own story. Our story was the best as our teacher told us. But she realised that it was my own work. Ups. ;P hehe

Tell me what you think about it.

I hope you like it.
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InSearchofHedonism's avatar
Sounds like a well written opening to a potential novel.
Keep it up!