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Broken Smile by *AyumiFey:iconAyumiFey:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Just like yesterday
I feel the same
Sorrow and pain
My dreams are dead.

Everything falls apart
My heart is in pain
One look into mirror
Shatters all of my dreams.

I don't know what to do
The demon inside me is alive
I'm so confused.

This empty feeling
That no one cares
I'm all alone.

No one feels what I feel
No one knows who I am
No one can see my tears.

So look for this girl
Which you see every night
The girl with a broken smile.

She's lost
Alone in the darkness
She's waiting for help
To find her own way.

Don't ask why
She's so fragile
Her heart is trembling
Just let her cry.
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My fifth collaboration with :iconaine1991:

My parts are in italics and ~Aine1991 ' are in normal... ^^
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~VincentFaust9:iconVincentFaust9: Apr 17, 2008, 6:18:53 AM
Kawał świetnego pisania! :clap: Tak trzymaj :D

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Yes... The farewells are painful... So badly that I don't want to get through them again...
-Freya
I don't know for who or what I'm fighting for. The most important thing now is to finish this...
-Clotho Buer
~Ass-Soul:iconAss-Soul: Apr 17, 2008, 6:20:31 AM
Beauty.

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MYSTIC SPIRAL CONSUMES MY ASS IN A CLOUD OF LEAVES FALLING FROM THE MOONS GRACE... do i fit in here yet? Didn't think so... Olive Juice Too!
~Aine1991:iconAine1991: Apr 17, 2008, 7:09:31 AM
Dziękuję za współ;pracę Ayumi-chan :hug:

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Sometimes I wish I were an angel
Sometimes I wish I were you...
~polmc40fou:iconpolmc40fou: Apr 17, 2008, 11:32:33 AM
that is exactly how I feel right now.

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Tyler/Kenji/Polmac the one and many

one mile in a direction is two miles in the other.
~lyena:iconlyena: Apr 17, 2008, 11:44:48 AM
it's beautiful aspecialy
don't ask her why she's so fragile
her heart is trembling just let her cry.
keep it up hugs
~TsukiIdzuna:iconTsukiIdzuna: Apr 17, 2008, 5:33:45 PM
Very lovely :)

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"When I have a little bit of money, I buy books. And if there's a little left, I buy food - Desderius Eramus
~Rijjka:iconRijjka: Apr 18, 2008, 12:26:21 PM
A very intresting concept, tandem poetry. Might have to give it a try some day, it has a unique feel to it.

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"March on, ioine brauelie, let us to it pell mell, If not to heaven then hand in hand to hell." -Shakespeare's Richard III
*AyumiFey:iconAyumiFey: Apr 18, 2008, 1:09:35 PM
Dziekuje bardzo :)

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You can close your eyes to things you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel.
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*RawEm0tion
*AyumiFey:iconAyumiFey: Apr 18, 2008, 1:09:40 PM
thank you.

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You can close your eyes to things you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel.
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*RawEm0tion
*AyumiFey:iconAyumiFey: Apr 18, 2008, 1:10:01 PM
Oh nie ma za co. Jak wiesz zawsze do uslug :glomp:

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You can close your eyes to things you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel.
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*RawEm0tion
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